The scene is water
all around
lots of puddles
lots of mud
what does it mean
it is still
except for a few
ripples from the birds
as they drink
the water is brown
the color of stability
could that be true
to find stability
in brown water
The scene is water
all around
lots of puddles
lots of mud
what does it mean
it is still
except for a few
ripples from the birds
as they drink
the water is brown
the color of stability
could that be true
to find stability
in brown water
March 3, 2008 at 4:47 pm
YES…..THIS IS TRUE….JUST LIKE WE CAN FIND BEAUTY FROM OUR ASHES!! KEEP ON KEEPIN’ ON GURRRL! THIS IS DEEP!
March 3, 2008 at 4:59 pm
I know this one is a bit of a “hidden meaning” poem.
Love ya Jenny!!
Chris